标题: 初中英语作文MyFather.评析 [打印本页] 作者: admin 时间: 2010-11-27 14:06 标题: 初中英语作文My Father .评析 My Father
My father is a little short, but he is very strong. He has short and black hair. His face is a little black, because he always does farm work under the sun. He always wears disreputable cloths. I haven’t seen him wear good cloths. My father is very laborious. Every morning, when I got up, he has already done farm work for a long time. When I went to bed. He still does farm work. He never said he is back-busting. My father is strict with my study. He always told me that I had to study well, if I study well, I would live better. So I study hard. I don’t want to make him disappointed. This is my father. I think he is a good man! I am proud to have a father like him.
1. I haven’t seen him wear good cloths. 改为 wearing
2. He never said he is back-busting. 改为 it 在这表达劳动是辛苦的
3. I don’t want to make him disappointed. 改为disappoint
4. I am proud to have a father like him . 改为 I am proud of having a father like him.