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| Come and meet my family. 
 My family has five members. This is my father. He`s a driver. He likes sports. This is my mother. She likes music. This is my grandma. She`s a farmer. She likes painting. And my name is Ken. I'm a student.
 
 
 
 点评:作者简洁明了介绍家庭成员的职业和爱好,句子通顺,用词得当。
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