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作文:Travebybikeorbus(高一作文)

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作文 :Trave by bike or bus(高一作文)
Trave by bike or bus

There are many people especially the young,prefering riding than taking buses going for a trip.But there are still some people like to travel by bus.In my view,both riding and taking buses have their two sides.

Riding is convenient and economical,we can save money on other important things.And riding is a way for exercising,which is good for our health.Howrever,riding is slower than buses,and don,t fit a long journey.

Buses are faster and more comfortable than riding.but taking a bus is not as convenient as riding.And if the transportation is busy,we would take a long time stay in a bus.

In a word,each way for travelling has its own characteristic.So the next time you choose the way for travelling,you should considering carefully and make a best decision.Good luck to you!

本文优点: 语意表达流畅,层次分明,观点明确.论述的条条有理.

美中不足: 个别词与句型使用不太恰当.
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