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书面表达是学生中考满分的瓶颈之一，从七年级起始阶段让学生结合自己的真实生活我真实、狠抓单元作文写前指导，写中监控、写后讲评夯实学生的写作基本功，意义重大。下面是七下第三单元学生的优秀作文和常见错误：
七九优秀作文：穆鑫磊
Dear Peter，
How are you ? Let me tell you how I get to school. I usually get to school by bike. I leave my home at 6:30.The school is about two kilometers from my home. It takes me about 20 minutes to get to school. I think riding a bike to school is good exercise.
七十优秀作文：朱嘉怡
Dear Peter，
How are you ? You want to know how I get to school, right? Well, I usually leave my home at about 6:30. I go to school by car. My school is about 2 kilometers from my home. It takes me three minutes to get to school.
I don’t think the ride is boring because I like the school.
常见错误：
1.I always gets to school by car.
2.I take a car for five fifty.
3.My school is about 120 kilometers from my home.
4.I walk go to school.
5.Thanks you.
6.I must ride a bike go to school
7.I usually get to school walk.
8.I usually by bike to school.
9.I usually ride a bike get to school.
10.Let’s me tell you.
11.I take my bike to go to school.
12.From my home to school needs ten minutes.
13.I usually on foot.
14.Do you by bike or by bus?
15.Do you want to know how can I get to school?
16.On foot is boring.
17.It take me ten minutes to get to school.
18.How far it is from school to my home?
19.I’m no boring.
20. It’s one kilometers.
21.I leave home about six ten.
22.From my home to school about 2 kilometers.
23.I by taxi go to school.
24.I usually rides a bike to school.
25.I usually take the car go to school.
26.I usually 6:00 get up.
27.From my home to school need 60 minutes.
28.I usually on foot to go to school.
29.I often 9:00 get to home. |
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发表于 2019-3-26 07:19:54
